Fan comic--Unstable SMP Parrot vs Saparata

This is my first inked pages--and I hope it makes my manga more clear and dynamic! Once again, my version is read left to right, and keep an eye out for manga elements or comic elements such as speech bubble shapes, background transitions, and speed lines. If you have anything you would like to share, please comment below! What is your favorite panel?

Bonus question: How long do you think it took to create?

I am interested in hearing your answers!

Fan Comic by Bailey Z, based on Unstable Universe, and characters of Parrot and Saparata. This is an unofficial fan work and is not affiliated with original creators.