Fan comic-Flamefrags vs Wemmbu Unstable SMP Manga

I have recently been getting into manga art, and as a drawing exercise for fight scenes I took a scene from Unstable SMP and turned it into manga! You may notice manga aspects such as katakana and speed lines--try to spot as many as you can! (Don't worry--it is left to right reading order).

Fan Comic by Bailey Z, based on Unstable Universe, and characters of Flamefrags and Wemmbu. This is an unofficial fan work and is not affiliated with original creators.